Star Trek- Excalibur

[Darrell Lawrence]

By popular demand!!!!

Ok ok... only one person said they wanted to read it...

...hmp!
http://www.3dgladiators.net/story/story1.html

Written a couple of years ago.

[Commodore-SirJohn]

Interesting story...

In its established continuity, it works.

(Hey, nobody said that our various stories were all set in the SAME Trek universe. http://www.3dgladiators.net/forums/ubb/ubbhtml/biggrin.gif)

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John H. Harris

The man behind STAR TREK: Tales of the Marshal Martz (http://martz.armadaproject.net)

[Big Steve]

Ah yes, the return of Trelane, IIRC. http://www.3dgladiators.net/forums/ubb/ubbhtml/smile.gif

BTW, Warrior, you'll be happy to know I bestowed the illustrious title "Old Man" to someone else. http://www.3dgladiators.net/forums/ubb/ubbhtml/smile.gif

[Darrell Lawrence]

Oh really? Who? *is jealous now*

[Big Steve]

Originally posted by WarriorDL:
Oh really? Who? *is jealous now*




Tron, one of our super moderators (as in can mod all forums instead of one, not a superhero joke thing) at Spacebattles. He's in his forties. http://www.3dgladiators.net/forums/ubb/ubbhtml/smile.gif

[Darrell Lawrence]

Well! I declare! http://www.3dgladiators.net/forums/ubb/ubbhtml/biggrin.gif

That's over there. I can still have the title over here, right? Huh? Huh? Well? :)

[moovok]

Brill story. A spelling mistake (not a real biggie) about in your first time you recall Risa, you spelt it Rysa (nothing big as I said).

The story, no offence, has a lack of gripping the reader. Though he has the good groundings to start to get into a good story, I do hope you carry this on, it would be good to see what the Captain does in the rest of the story.

Other than that, good description with the sunlight, I always like description in a story, it's something all stories need to make a point to the reader and to picture something in their heads.

Good work WarriorDL!!!! http://www.3dgladiators.net/forums/ubb/ubbhtml/biggrin.gif

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- Mikey

[Darrell Lawrence]

...umm No spelling mistake on that.

In TOS there is a Rysa. Diff planet than the Risa in TNG.

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"If not for TOS, then there would be no Trek movies, TNG, DS9 or Voyager."

"All I ask is that you read and understand before jumping to conclusions."

"Legends never die... They just get new Captains."

[moovok]

Originally posted by WarriorDL:
In TOS there is a Rysa. Diff planet than the Risa in TNG.

Ah! Other than that, a good story. Gonna finish it or is that it????

(There goes my knowledge of Star Trek down the window)

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- Mikey

[Darrell Lawrence]

It is finished. Did you read all 20 parts????

[Big Steve]

Originally posted by WarriorDL:
Well! I declare! http://www.3dgladiators.net/forums/ubb/ubbhtml/biggrin.gif


That's over there. I can still have the title over here, right? Huh? Huh? Well? http://www.3dgladiators.net/forums/ubb/ubbhtml/smile.gif




We'll see. http://www.3dgladiators.net/forums/ubb/ubbhtml/smile.gif

[General Phoenix]

Part One was very good - I'll have to get into the other 19 later... http://www.3dgladiators.net/forums/ubb/ubbhtml/smile.gif


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[Darrell Lawrence]

:eek: This thing still exists? :lol: