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Very nice. I especially like the fleet shot. :)

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@evil_genius: just curious, but did you notice the sound the Romulan fighter made as it flew past? :)

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You mean the Star Wars sound effect? Yes, I noticed that. Was that a TIE Fighter sound?

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Yessir, it was!

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good effect ...... nice level of tension on the Bridge there too

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Next one's up: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mImhVjLHRqI

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looks good .. looking forward to the next part ---- :)

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Yeah, what Ger said. :D

I guess we found Gaius' Romulan twin. ;)

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Updated draft of Scene 19 is up: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ui5UTRA9n-I

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It looks good. What did you change?

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This time, it's gloomy and overcast instead of sunny and inviting :)

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I thought the thunder and lightning were new but I wasn't sure. That's a nice change, it adds a darker tone to the scene, which it needs.

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Some of the folks over at Scifi-Meshes (I know, I know, mentioning their name is blasphemy around here :-) ) thought this scene still needed something more, so I'm going to make a third version with different dialogue. We'll see which one wins out!

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Why would mentioning Scifi-Meshes be blasphemy around here? SFM isn't a bad place though, admittedly, I haven't been there in ages myself. One can get some good advice from people over there.

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I was just joking, but what I was thinking about was that whole competitor thing :)

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I know you were joking. Though, it's not really a competition, we're all part of a community. Personally, I like posting things on multiple forums, you get more diverse feedback that way. :)

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better I think . bit more dramatic

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Here's the third version of the scene, with changes suggested at SFM: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sqfXe6N-7R8

See what you guys think!

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I like that one best, it's got more substance than the others.

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Next one's up: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gcBKJElYn4k

This is the one everyone's been waiting for...the identity of the mysterious Drakus revealed!