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Old July 31st, 2003, 08:34 PM   #16
Masao
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Well, at the risk of being overly detail obsessed, here are some of the problems:
1. The end caps of the nacelle are hollow and the balls are too large
2. The depressed machinery area on the inboard surface of the nacelle has an incorrect grill and is lacking raised bars above and below the grill
3. The bar on the forward part of the machinery area has an incorrect plate at its front end and has some additional vertical pillars at its ends.
4. The bars at the ends of the nacelle (and on the inboard nacelle) are too rounded in cross section and have incorrect longitudinal bars instead of a waffle pattern. The bars should have that small extension only in front and not in back. The extension is also too rounded.
5. The plates attaching the bussards to the nacelle front are rounded rather than being flat and rectangular. The three plates at the bottom front of the nacelles should be curved rather than flat.
6. The rectangles on the nacelle supports are raised and have an incorrect pattern.
7. The corrugated plates on the sides near the back of the nacelle has too few ridges. Same with the hoods at the ends.
8. The bridge humps should be more rounded.
9. I think that the top of the primary hull is too flat at the edge (not quite sure about this one. It might just be the lighting, but the registry should be entirely on the slope). This means that elevation should start nearer the edge.
10. The detailing on that horizontal piece at the top rear of the primary hull looks a bit simpliflied. The red stripe to the bridge is missing. The L-shaped markings should be grey outlines only with no fill. The smaller rectangles should be yellow. The impulse thruster also looks a bit simplified.
11. The markings on the bottom of the secondary hull and under the fantail extend back to far.
12. The base of the sensor on the ventral primary hull is too rounded.
13. There should be a raised red light near the rear top of the secondary hull (where you have three white lights) and a raised white light at the sides is missing (near 1837).
14. Numerous hull warning signs missing.
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