Thread: Star Trek: Retribution
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Old July 22nd, 2011, 02:16 PM   #240
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Default Re: Star Trek: Retribution
I'm not really seeing how you can shorten it. You didn't clutter the scene with useless chatter, it's all need-to-know information. Is there any reason it has to be shorter? I think it works as it is.

BTW:

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Is Garr's younger self in the cargo bay?
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