[tnpir4001]

Looking ahead to the next scene, I'm not even posting this over at SFM, the quality of feedback over there has been lacking lately, so the 3DG crowd is it.

I'm trying to decide if this scene as written is enough, or if it needs something more. Originally, the Fitzgerald made for an asteroid field (Reyf knew about it and also knew of a safe path through it), then dropped quantum torpedoes like mines in their wake as a means of slowing down the Romulans. That would give them just enough time to make it to the Federation side of the Neutral Zone, where the task force of three ships would be waiting and would "scare off" the Romulans rather than have them attack. I dropped that sequence as an effects-heavy sequence that didn't seem to be terribly essential (not to mention similarity to Empire Strikes Back).

Script is attached...take a look and let me know!