If the mesh is too movie era let me know and I'll rebuld the scenes with a different ship.
But if I might suggest something... There is a thread here where some of us are expressing disappointment in the digital remaster version of TOS because of the lack of quality models used in it.
I know (and do honestly understand) your desire to keep your story in the TOS era and settings, but I really think it could be a good idea to use some of the meshes with a more realistic look to them.
For these storyboards I've been trying to find a even keel between the TOS look/feel and the awesomeness of some of the meshes I've found.
I like your project and I want to do my best in helping you bring it to life.
Oh another thought/question.
I know you want to make it so that people can log in and check out your story without having to download anything, however if we make the images/movies in a flash format we can add sound and a lot better look. You can make a link to download Flash on the site and really, most people already have the ability to view the files because of the popularity of sites like YouTube.
I'm not trying to steer you down a bad road - I'm just brainstorming.
I hope you do not mind.
