That's great!
I wonder how it would look with a different font, but I love the hat at the end. Nice touch!
BTW, I've opened an official Entry Thread in the Contest Forum - here's the link:
http://www.3dgladiators.net/forums/s...ad.php?t=20907
When you have your final entry ready, let me know, and I'll be happy to host it locally, in both hi-res and low-res versions.