Well, no one ever got back to me regarding my request for feedback...but nevertheless I think I've managed to put together an ending we can all live with. It's got a wonderful (if a bit cliche-ridden) showdown between heroes and villain, a last-minute plot twist, and an ending that I think is very heartwarming...
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As soon as the attachments function starts working again, I'll post the scene writeups in full for all to see, in case you want to have the ending spoiled or just want to contribute a onceover.