The scene with Prentice and Reyf in the observation lounge looks great.
As for the document, the scene looks good. Its' a fast-paced scene that will most likely feature some really cool effects, so it doesn't need as complex writing as a dialog scene. The only thing I can think of it lacking is the communication with the
Insignia. Prentice orders it but it doesn't happen. Or is that the next sequence following this one?
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Originally Posted by Taranis
I thought I replied to this the other day..... my mind is going
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It could be that vbulletin bug that makes posts occasionally disappear. I wonder if they're ever going to fix that.