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Old June 5th, 2011, 08:34 AM   #196
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Default Re: Star Trek: Retribution

That's a real possibility...

But in the meantime, take a look at the preliminary writeup for Scene 29 and see what you think. I'm not happy with this version (the dialogue seems hollow and doesn't feel like it flows well), so if anyone's got ideas for how to improve on this, let's hear it.
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